Ah, I really loved this! I like how you used different colour schemes to portray different moods throughout the story. Your storytelling style is so atmospheric and beautiful; please draw more comics \ o /
Oh my god! That story was so cute and a little bit sad too! The drawings were amazing, I like how you slightly changed style in the different panels but how you still kept it a coherent whole. It was really adorable and beautifully drawn. Even the handwriting is pretty!
SO LOVELY. I think you did a wonderful job despite doing it in 4 days haha. The story had an interesting twist, and leaves you a bit curious at the end, but it's not so open-ended that it feels unfinished. And god I just can't get over how gorgeous that colouring is. <3 <3
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU REALLY DID IT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH GRAAAAAAAAAAACE Although I don't know if like lol maybe I'm a ditz, but if I hadn't read your plans on it before, I wouldn't have realized the boy was in the second-to-last panel TvT;;;;